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Wednesday, 12 November 2014
Initial Narrative Run-Through
Rich/Poor Trailer
· Shows logos – diegetic sound of car crash – no visual
· Cut to child crying/hiding (just experienced crash/trauma), comforting hand of other child, go to a bench/seat, one comforts the other – They become friends through this
· Graphic match to same hands in hospital – EMOTIONAL HOSPITAL BIT
· Shows flashback through editing – bright white – zoom into hospital light
· Cut to posh guy getting ready early in the morning – showing him taking pride in his appearance, putting on a suit, combing his hair etc (camera as mirror?)
· Show watch/clock, then cutting to watch/clock in misfortunate guy’s room, showing the same time – still in bed, room is a tip, obviously doesn’t care, no self-pride etc – fades out to black
· Fortunate guy getting out of fancy car, walks into nice building, pans from guy going into door to sign by door advertising interview/internship – making progress in his career
· Cuts to misfortunate guy dealing drugs/taking drugs in alleyway – shady, not good
· misfortunate guy on bench (different clothes, different day) – costume/mise-en-scene shows he’s scruffy – fortunate guy walks up in very posh suit – obviously well-off – sits down to eat his lunch
· Pause, then moment of realisation as they recognise each other.
Rich tries to help poor...
· Shows logos – diegetic sound of car crash – no visual
· Cut to child crying/hiding (just experienced crash/trauma), comforting hand of other child, go to a bench/seat, one comforts the other – They become friends through this
· Graphic match to same hands in hospital – EMOTIONAL HOSPITAL BIT
· Shows flashback through editing – bright white – zoom into hospital light
· Cut to posh guy getting ready early in the morning – showing him taking pride in his appearance, putting on a suit, combing his hair etc (camera as mirror?)
· Show watch/clock, then cutting to watch/clock in misfortunate guy’s room, showing the same time – still in bed, room is a tip, obviously doesn’t care, no self-pride etc – fades out to black
· Fortunate guy getting out of fancy car, walks into nice building, pans from guy going into door to sign by door advertising interview/internship – making progress in his career
· Cuts to misfortunate guy dealing drugs/taking drugs in alleyway – shady, not good
· misfortunate guy on bench (different clothes, different day) – costume/mise-en-scene shows he’s scruffy – fortunate guy walks up in very posh suit – obviously well-off – sits down to eat his lunch
· Pause, then moment of realisation as they recognise each other.
Rich tries to help poor...
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